Thursday, 14 February 2013
Draft Poster Design 2 - Carla
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| My second draft poster idea |
I prefer this draft much more to my first one as it looks more professional and I've thought more about each action I've taken on Photoshop. Here are a few points as to why I prefer this draft design:
- The use of the Red Title and matching logo on his gloves stands out very clearly and suggests danger.
- The image Isaac took of James is very effective as James/Mr X is completely un-identifiable. The fact James is in his Motorbike Leathers and Helmet - very little about the film is given away creating the ambiguity we wanted to achieve.
- The Low Angle makes James looks very domineering and quite threatening.
- The Black and White image further makes it look mysterious.
- The picture of James putting the package in his jacket will make the audience curious as to what the transaction is about.
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| Creating the Poster on Photoshop |
Little White Lies Research - Isaac
Little White Lies is a bi-monthly, British independent film magazine. The magazine is produced by independent company 'Church Of England'. Each issue is based around one specific film, featuring reviews, excellent graphics and illustrations, and a number of articles.
The magazine is targeted at both men and women, however recent results have showed that the readership is predominantly male, most commonly aged 25-35. The in-depth detail and creativity of the magazine suggests that it would only be bought by real film fanatics, or perhaps people interested in graphic art/design.
Little White Lies is not found in newsagents like other magazines, and the magazine itself really resembles a book. It can be bought online through substitution, and in a few select shops such as 'Urban Outfitters'.
Above is an example of a Little White Lies cover. As previously mentioned, LWL focuses each issue on one specific film, this issue is clearly based on Shane Meadow's 'This Is England'. Each issue has a visually pleasing front cover, an adaption of the certain film.
The review section is one of the main aspects of the magazine, and follows the same layout in each issue. The reviews use some very complex language, that only film enthusiasts would understand; it is all very field specific. Puns and humor are also used frequently, to keep the review entertaining. The reviews always look very bold, with thick black titling and a large picture, making them eye-catching and engaging. A ranking system is used in the bottom right corner, marking the film out of 5 for anticipation, retrospect and enjoyment. This ranking is used in every review in LWL.
Tuesday, 12 February 2013
Our Draft Review - Carla & Harrison
Transaction,
directed by HARISA CARJAM is a short film dedicated to uncertainty. Harrison
Blake appears in his second short film with a role of a furtive character, who
establishes the initial plot. James Ely bags his role, in his debut, as the
secretive focus who we follow throughout.
As
the film opens with gripping music, it is instantaneous that creating suspense
is key to the plot. The restricted narration leaves us wanting more, and
feeling vulnerable. Cunningly crafted with a simple yet effective plot, the
story unfolds misleading us towards an inevitable ending, only to twist at the
last moment. Spanning only a day, this short film is not lacking action and the
intelligent use of the GoPro Hero 2 gives the audience an alternative perspective.
No
surname, backstory, or real identification of who these characters are, makes
them feel isolated and we’re left wanting more. The films assertion that the
package is on a dubious journey right up until the end leaves the audience
feeling satisfied they know how it will turn out. Some may have a hunch the
plot might twist, and rightfully so. The perfectly co-ordinated meet-up, the
suspenseful journey up to the secluded downs, the non-committal verbal exchange
and one character’s hurry to leave with the package allude it might be an
illegal object. As Mr X hastily exits on his motorbike, it carries forward this
idea. It becomes obvious there is a plot twist when a girl, identified as his
sister greets him happily at the door. This
anticipation is worthy of waiting for.
Camera
shots throughout this piece are high-quality are extremely imaginative. The
colour correction used throughout gives the film an alternative overlook which
reinforces the feel of ambiguity. Furthermore, the non-diegetic sound plays a
vital role in transfixing the viewer in to a state of suspense.
Blake
and Ely are both robust actors that help give the short film a more
professional feel. The lack of speech throughout emphasises the indefinite ending,
which keeps the audience questioning what’s to come. The stereotyped outfits
hide their traits, and further pushes the theme of a false of knowing. The
black leathers Mr X wears foreshadow the questionable trouble ahead.
The
film does a great job of deceiving the audience yet we never even get the
satisfaction of finding out what’s inside the package. Perhaps this film could have
thrown in some more thrilling elements and developed the ending into a more
conclusive result.
More Poster Ideas - Isaac
Here is another of my rough drafts of our film poster. I once again created this on photoshop using screen grabs from our film.
I think that using these two images work really well, as they introduce the two main characters and also suggest who the transaction may be between.
Looking back on this design I feel that the title needs to be a lot bigger, making it look significant on the page. We could also consider adding in actors names, although this is not greatly important for our film, as being low-budget, our actors are now well known and will not be the reason people go to watch our film.
Once again I have missed out some features such as a tagline, however this can be explained in a previous blog post.
InDesign Review Draft - Isaac
Here is my first draft of our short film review. It is based on the style of reviews in 'Little White Lies' magazine. To create this, I used InDesign software, which I had never used before and have ow gained some skills in. As a group we shall be writing our own review, and when complete we will go on to use this as a template for our final copy.
Here is an example of a film review taken from Little White Lies magazine.
As you can see the layout is very similar to the review I designed.
In order to make my review look as similar to the original as possible, I found certain features of the articles that were always the same and followed the pattern on my own piece.
For example:
- LWL reviews always have 2 and a half columns, with roughly 6-7 paragraphs. I followed this rule in my draft by creating 3 texts boxes with the same width and height as the columns on the original reviews.
- I found two fonts that looked very similar to those used in LWL, and followed their rules on making certain letters bold or italic.
- I have also attempted to copy the ratings feature in the bottom right corner, and made the numbers very large in Little White Lies style.
- All little white lies reviews have a large picture at the top of the page, I copied this with an image of our group, and once again used the correct measurements making it the correct size.
- Lastly, I added a page number, making note that LWL's add a '0' onto the number, for example '028'. I also added the word 'review' at the side, as that is always one the review page.
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