Synopsis - 'The Package'
Two unnamed men meet at the top of the South Downs. One travels by motorcycle and one travels by car. They meet in a car park and an inconspicuous handover takes place. One character hands over money in return for a ambiguous looking package. However in a rush to leave, he doesn't do his bag up properly and his package flies out of the bag on to the car park ground. No one see's as the other man has already left. However a dog notices the package on the floor and goes over to sniff it. The innocent dog owner goes over and see's the package. She picks it up and curiosity gets the better of her and she opens it. As she opens it a look of pure shock crosses her face.
Meanwhile the character on the motorcycle reaches a house with a happy birthday banner. He knocks on the door and opens his bag to find the package then realises it's missing just as the door opens...
This is a good idea it seems, but I am a bit concerned that there may not be enough here for 5 mins. You need to decide what is actually in the box so that you can plan and create sufficient reaction from actors.
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