I'm not sure about the presentation of the tagline here. Look at others and note the size of font and the use (or not) of capitals. i'm not sure either that this design beats Carla's, which I think is very striking. You need to consider all of this in your evaluations.
I suggest you work on this again in this extra time window. At the moment, this is level 3 and therefore you risk not achieving a level you could achieve overall. Look at my comments above (you don't appear to have acted on them?). As a group, you still need to make a final decision about the the final poster - I recommend you reconsider.
I'm not sure about the presentation of the tagline here. Look at others and note the size of font and the use (or not) of capitals. i'm not sure either that this design beats Carla's, which I think is very striking. You need to consider all of this in your evaluations.
ReplyDeleteI suggest you work on this again in this extra time window. At the moment, this is level 3 and therefore you risk not achieving a level you could achieve overall. Look at my comments above (you don't appear to have acted on them?). As a group, you still need to make a final decision about the the final poster - I recommend you reconsider.
ReplyDeleteYour title font is not the same as the film. This must be changed before March 22nd.
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